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Are you sure? I can point out a few inaccuracies and grammar mistakes:
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Are you sure? I can point out several inaccuracies, inconsistencies, and grammar mistakes:
   
 
Calvin "touched" the "Pernicious Poem Place", he didn't "land on" it
 
Calvin "touched" the "Pernicious Poem Place", he didn't "land on" it
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The "'''B'''onus '''B'''ox" should have the "B"s in bold
 
The "'''B'''onus '''B'''ox" should have the "B"s in bold
   
The rule about the black masks is repeated
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<span style="font-size:14px;font-weight:normal;">Too much use of parentheses throughout the article, rules repeated too many times inconsistently, etc.</span>
 
This line: "<span style="font-size:14px;font-weight:normal;">Although all games of Calvinball are different, (you make up the rules as you go), many of them seem to involve a volleyball (the Calvinball), masks, and pickets with numbers printed on them." has too many commas and parentheses</span>
 
 
<span style="font-size:14px;font-weight:normal;">Etc.</span>
 

Revision as of 16:07, February 10, 2017

Are you sure? I can point out several inaccuracies, inconsistencies, and grammar mistakes:

Calvin "touched" the "Pernicious Poem Place", he didn't "land on" it

The "Bonus Box" should have the "B"s in bold

Too much use of parentheses throughout the article, rules repeated too many times inconsistently, etc.

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